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COMP 3012.1: Writing and the Humanities

“An Institute for the Production of Knowledge”

Spring 1995

Lind Hall 217

MWF  9:05 - 9:55

Director: Eric Drown

 

                                                           

                                                                                                           

Office:                           467 Lind Hall                                                     Writing Lab: 330 Lind Hall

Messages:                    625-1587                                                           Mac/PC Labs: 26 Lind/152 Folwell Hall

Office Phone:                 625-2028                                                           Office Hours:     TBA

E-mail address:             drown001@maroon.tc.umn.edu                           Comp. Program Office: 306 Lind Hall

 

Introduction:

Over the past twenty years the humanities have increasingly come under fire as conservative policy-makers have asked what the humanities have to offer the citizens, economy and polity of the United States.   Why, ask policy-makers such as former Chair of the National Endowment of the Humanities Lynn Cheney, should the tax dollars of hard-working Americans continue to fund the unproductive, “politically-correct” research of disruptive, anti-capitalist professors of humanities? Though Cheney’s description of the projects, practices, and practitioners of the humanities misrepresents the richness and diversity of dialogue in the humanities, rhetorics like hers have become the terms by which the worth of the humanities is measured both inside and outside of the academy.  It is crucial therefore, that those of us interested in the humanities begin to formulate some kind of answer to Cheney’s albeit disingenuous question. 

One way to begin to answer the political critics of the humanities is to address the fruits of our research to a public audience.  It is my contention that the public has a vested interest in what the humanities has to say about American thought, culture, history, and society.  Therefore, this class will be run as an institute, that is, as a “think-tank.”  The National Endowment for the Humanities has hired us to conduct research into a cultural matter of public interest so that it can make informed decisions regarding funding policies.  Our job, then, is to make the insights of the humanities comprehensible to a wide-range of readers whose expertise varies considerably (including the disciplinary experts who initially review grant-applications, the more generally educated foundation staff who process them, and Sheldon Hackney, the present Chair who makes the final decision).  Beyond this, we must enable policy makers to evaluate the relative merits of humanities research in order to make policy responsibly.  A rigorous study of argument will facilitate this second goal. 

Much contemporary writing in the humanities has been bedeviled by impenetrable style and abstruse vocabulary.  I believe that while complex ideas need not be “dumbed down” for the reading public, that writers should make every effort to communicate effectively with readers.  So this institute will examine the use and abuse of language, arguments, and style, investigating the epistemological paradigms that make knowledge-making possible.  We will, therefore, emphasize explicit statements of the cultural, historical, and intellectual world-views that inform the disciplines of the humanities, both as institutions and as individual practices.

Generally, the humanities ask questions about who people are and how they live, that is about how individuals and groups live in and produce complex cultures and societies.  How these questions are asked and what methods guide the search for answers vary from discipline to discipline.  Historians look at change over time, cultural geographers examine how human beings shape the spaces in which they live; cultural studies practitioners examine how discourses and rhetorics shape human culture; language specialists study the languages and cultures of other societies; literary critics examine written culture, both fictional and non-fictional; and journalists attempt to report the narratives of our lives as individuals, communities, states, and nations.  Beyond disciplines, the humanities are characterized by interpretive orientations that reflect and/or challenge the ideological convictions of intellectuals committed to social justice.  Feminists take gender as a primary object of study, deconstructionists posit the radical relativity of meaning, new historians question the facticity of all histories while examining the rhetorical conventions that have shaped our knowledge of the past and present.  One of the goals of this course is, therefore, to facilitate discussion among the disciplines and orientations within the humanities and encourage intellectual cross-fertilization. 

Since writing is a form of discussion, since it is a particularly powerful learning method, and since writing is a way to produce knowledge, this course will require several different kinds of writing.  One major objective of the course is that students actually produce, construct, manufacture some knowledge useful to their discipline and the humanities.  I’d like to structure this class as an institute of interrelated “seminar” groups aimed at the production of 15 page conference-style works-in-progress papers.  I will not be setting the agenda for this class.  You, as an intellectual community, will take responsibility for all stages of the production of knowledge: designing and defending research projects, compiling reading lists, processing readings in a useful way, and organizing a mini-conference at the end of the quarter.  You will need to be self-directed, to be able to work within small and large groups, to get work done on time, to take and give constructive criticism, and to manage the freedom and responsibility of participation in this institute.  If you feel uncomfortable with this structure, please talk to me immediately after the first class so that we can decide if this is the right learning opportunity for you. 

Finally, since the pace of a 10-week course is demanding, as Director of Research, I'll be asking you to make project decisions about topics well before you feel comfortable, to work in groups, and to keep up.  If you need help at any stage, please contact me.  Procrastination is your worst enemy.  If you don’t believe me check out the daily schedule near the end of this document.

The Theory Behind the Design:

My responsibility in this course is to provide students with an opportunity for learning.  I believe that the course I have designed offers students a chance to practice more than just grammar and rhetoric skills.  The first section of the course dedicated to planning, forming ideas, reading well and communicating understanding for a reason, and the intellectual justification of a learning sequence/research project.  The writings in this section—primarily abstracts, defenses of research projects and response/position papers —stress the idea that writing is an active learning strategy that can facilitate the framing of research questions, planning, and theory construction.   The middle section of the course takes off from the first, providing students with the opportunity to model their own writing protocols and research strategies on pieces of writing that they feel represent quality academic work within their own and related disciplines.  Finally, the last part of the course is dedicated to related research and the formal presentation of work-in-progress papers.  This section of the course helps students formalize their ideas, present extended arguments or interpretations of significant cultural phenomena and practice the rhetorical and organizational skills that are specific to their disciplines without pressure to reach hasty conclusions. 

Above all, I believe that the institute format of the course encourages students to take ownership of the knowledge that they produce and responsibility for their learning.  Many classes in students’ academic life position them as “receptacles” to be “filled up” with the knowledge of their teachers.  This approach often encourages students to mistake information processing for learning, and to abdicate their responsibility for their own development as thinkers.  This course is designed to help students rely on their considerable intellectual and pedagogical resources.  Faced with my refusal to accept the traditional role of a “teacher,” that is, to accept the role of someone who has knowledge who is supposed to “pass it on” to students, and my emphasis of my role as a skilled question-asker, as a close reader, and as a consulting manager/coordinator, students must take on the roles of expert and teacher for themselves. 

A Word on Office Hours and/or E-mail

In a class of 25, it is impossible for me to give close attention to each student regularly in class.  My office hours are intended to be opportunities for students to come for one-on-one discussions about anything: from writing and research problems to problems with class dynamics.  You just want to talk about ideas or something inter­esting you’ve read?  Come on in.  I like talking with students.  I’ll do my best to make you feel comfortable.  Please, please, please take advantage of this time. 

Sometimes students are intimidated by one-on-one talks with instructors.  If you’re one of these students, use e-mail to write me a memo.  It may take a day or two or three for me to get back to you, but I will.  If you don’t know about e-mail, call Sheppard Labs/CIS at 626-5592.  Every student registered in day school is entitled to a free e-mail account.  You already have it; take advantage of it.  If enough students have and use E-mail, I can send class announcements and assignments electronically.

 

Policy for Human Dignity

All members of the class will be treated with respect.  I do not believe that honest differences in passion, point of view, and politics must be erased to facilitate harmony. But throughout this class, thoughtful dialogue will replace violent confrontation and demeaning behavior whenever disagreements arise.

Writing Format

You should make a backup disk or photocopy of all your work.  Error or breakdown—your, mine, or the machine's—can happen.  I will hold you responsible to have copies of your work.  Never, I repeat never, save your work to a public hard drive.  I have had students steal work from one another by lifting papers stored on hard drives in one of the dorm computer labs.  In order to protect yourself from the ordeal of plagiarism always save your work to a floppy disk when working on a public computer.

In order to be accepted, all work must be: word processed in a 12-point font with 1 inch margins, double-spaced, stapled (not paper clipped or dog-eared), and accompanied by notes and bibliography that conform to MLA/APA standards.  You are responsible for correct grammar, spelling, and typography.  Pages must be numbered, and your name must appear on each page.  I must receive all papers by the meeting time of the date due.  Because of the pace of a 10-week quarter, late papers will not be accepted. 

Grading

My grading policy conforms to CLA guidelines.  Be advised that CLA considers a C to be equivalent to basic fulfillment of the course requirements.  In order to get anything higher than a C, you will have to perform beyond the basic course requirements.  If you are concerned about your grade, please consult with me early and often.  A's and B's are honors grades.  Please read the following grading scale carefully.

 

F.........You turned in the assignment but did not attempt to fulfill the requirements, or you did not turn in the assignment.

D.........You attempted to fulfill the requirements, but did not meet basic standards in content, clarity, and insight.

C.........You completed the assignment and satisfied all requirements.

B.........You completed the assignment and satisfied all requirements. Further, your paper is mechanically perfect, and you developed and supported an argument, generating new insights. 

A.........You completed the assignment and satisfied all requirements. Your paper is mechanically perfect, and you expressed your ideas with particular elegance, style, and/or wit. Finally, you developed and supported an argument with exceptional skill, generating new insights, and placing them in a meaningful context.

 

All writing will be judged according to how well it meets these criteria:

1) content:  How well have you considered/discussed the task at hand, the meaning of what you have read, thought, seen, or said? How well have you mustered pertinent information and evidence in support of mean­ingful claims?  Have you handled facts accurately?

2) CLARITY:  How well have you expressed your ideas, arguments, or interpretations?  Is your prose clean and clear, intelligible and jargon-free?  How persuasive are your arguments and interpretations.

3) insight:  How complete is your paper—have you considered potential objections to your argument or in­terpretation? Have you thought through the social, political, or logical implications of your argument?  Have you gone beyond the conventional wisdom to consider alternative explanations or interpretations of your data?  Does your paper pass the “So What?” test?

In order to earn an A for a paper, your writing must excel in all three categories.

 

Acts of scholastic dishonesty may result in an F for the course and additional disciplinary action.

 

Course-Grade Breakdown

 

Final paper=35%

Reading responses=30%

Abstract and Defense=15%

Paper Proposal=20%

 

 

Course-Grade Calculation

 

All grades in this course will be given in letter form.  The following grades are available:

 

A+

A

A-

B+

B

B-

C+

C

C-

D+

D

D-

F

 

In order to facilitate calculation, letter grades correspond to numbers; thus,

 

A+ =

A =

A- =

B+ =

B =

B- =

C+ =

C =

C- =

D+ =

D =

D- =

F =

12

11

10

9

8

7

6

5

4

3

2

1

0

 

The formula I use to calculate your grade is:

 

            (G1 x .35) + (G2 x .30) + (G3 x .15) + (G4 x .20) = Final Grade

 

where G1 = the Final Paper,  G2 =  the average of Reading Responses, G3 = the average of Abstracts and Defenses, and G4 = the Paper Proposal.

 

Your final letter grade is assigned based on the result of this calculation.

 

Since + and - grades cannot be reported to CLA, the range for each final letter grade is as follows (figures are rounded to one decimal place):

 

A = 12-10

B = 9.9 - 7.0

C = 6.9 - 4.0

D = 3.9 - 1.0

F = < 0.9

Attendance

A research institute requires the constant participation of all members.  If you are unable to attend class for what you believe is a legitimate reason, you should call the Director, before class time if at all possible, at the phone number listed at the head of this document, leave a message on the message line, or send an e-mail memo explaining the circumstances of your absence.  Please read the attached sheet for the Composition Program’s policy relating class attendance to final grades.  This policy should be considered part of the syllabus.

Incompletes

Incompletes will not be given.  If you do not complete an assignment you will receive no credit for that assignment and your course grade will reflect this.  If there are specific attenuating circumstances, please contact me immediately.

Readings/Books

Since, as a class, you will assign the primary reading for the class, we will need to arrange a way to distribute copies of the readings efficiently.  This is one thing that we can negotiate as a class.

Annette Rottenberg’s The Structure of Argument will be on reserve at Walter Library.

Writing Lab

Located in 330B/C Lind Hall, the Writing Lab has regular walk-in hours and provides appointments for extra help.  On occasion, I will recommend that you go for help with a specific problem.  This is not a punishment.  It will provide a second opinion and one-on-one instruction that is not possible in a class of this size.

 

Proposed Daily Schedule

Due at Beginning of Class:

Monday, March 25:

•First day of class.

Wednesday, March 27:

•Disciplinary definition.
•How is knowledge made in your discipline?

•What implications does this process have for producing cultural “truths”?

•Write: A 250 word operational definition or description of your discipline.
•Compile a list of 5 citation indexes, 2 electronic sources, and 10 journals useful to humanities research.

Friday, March 29:

•Negotiate the institute’s research focus.

•Writing Protocol Self-Analysis.

•Prepare a list of 3 possible themes/topics for the institute’s focus.  For each topic, write a persuasive argument why we should study it, and articulate the public’s interest in the matter.  Make sure you specify which “public” you’re writing about.

Monday, April 1:

•Question asking.

•Begin to brainstorm individual projects.

•Abstracts, Defenses

•Prepare a 20 citation working bibliography on institute’s research focus. 

Wednesday, April 3:

•Negotiate course reading list.

•2 abstracts & annotations.  Bring 3 copies of each.

•Bring a clean copy of each article you choose to write on to class to put on Reserve.

Friday, April 5:

•Argument: Intro. & Claims.

•Read Rottenberg, Ch. 1-2, 9.

•Revise question list.

Monday, April 8:

•Critical Reading.

•Close analysis of paragraphs: Function, topic, concepts, evidence

•Reading response #1.

•Read: Assigned articles (A-B).

•List of operational questions for individual project (at least 10).

Wednesday, April 10:

•Critical Reading.

•Introductions & Conclusions

•Reading response #2.

•Read: Assigned articles (C-D).

•Detailed/Conceptual Project Schedule/Plan.

Friday, April 12:

•Argument: Definition, Support.

•Read: Rottenberg, Ch. 3-4 .

Monday, April 15:

•Critical Reading.

•Reading response #3.

•Read: Assigned articles (E-F).

Wednesday, April 17:

•Critical Reading.

•Reading response #4.

•Read: Assigned articles (G-H).

Friday, April 19:

•Argument: Warrants, Language and Thought.

•Read: Rottenberg, Ch. 5-6.

•Paper proposal due with bibliography.

Monday, April 22:

•Critical Reading.

•Reading response 5#.

•Read: Assigned articles (I-J).

Wednesday, April 24:

•Critical Reading.

•Reading response #6.

•Read: Assigned articles (K-L).

Friday, April 26:

•Argument: Logical Fallacies.

•Read Rottenberg, Ch. 7-8.

 

Monday, April 29:

•Class discussion of individual projects.

•Working annotated bibliography for your project due.  (All works on this list should be read well before this date).  Write these annotations as you read the articles.

•If scheduled, prepare a 5 minute formal presentation of your topic.

Wednesday, May 1:

•Class discussion of individual projects.

•Continue independent research and writing.

•If scheduled, prepare a 5 minute formal presentation of your topic.

Friday, May 3:

•Class discussion of individual projects.

•Continue independent research and writing.

•If scheduled, prepare a 5 minute formal presentation of your topic.

Monday, May 6:

•Self-analysis.

•1st draft due: intro./context, 1st argument, example, or summary.

•Bring [4 ] copies of draft to class with you.

Wednesday, May 8:

•Peer review.

•Prepare for peer review.
•Read Cuba, Ch. 8.

Friday, May 10:

 

•Independent Research and Writing.

•Individual consultations (Meet in 467 Lind)

Monday, May 13:

•Self-analysis.

•2nd draft due: complete skeleton, 3/4 flesh.

•Bring [4 ] copies of draft to class with you.

Wednesday, May 15:

•Peer Review.

•Prepare for peer review.

Friday, May 17:

•Conference.

Monday, May 20:

•Conference.

Wednesday, May 22:

•Conference.

Friday, May 24:

•Conference.

Monday, May 27:

•No Class: Memorial Day.

Wednesday, May 29:

•Conference.

Friday, May 31:

•Conference.
•Last day of class; final papers due.

 

FINAL PAPERS DUE FRIDAY, May 31 in class.  If you want your paper back before next quarter, leave a SASE (with at least 2x32¢ stamps on it) with it.